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Kicking Clouds

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Scales: Hey, Swirl!

Airswirl: Hi, Scales. What's new with you, pal?

Scales: I need your help!

Airswirl: What is it?

Scales: Rainbow Dash got sick and she can't clear the sky today. She asked me to do it, but I don't think I can clear it all in time for the noon sun. Can you help me?

Airswirl: Of course I can! We can even have a competition ;)

Scales: Oh? With what?

Airswirl: Who can clear more clouds in 30 seconds!

Scales: You're on! Ready, set...

Airswirl: GO!!! *zoom!*

Scales: Hey, no fair!!! *giggles*



Commission for :iconfenrirconnell: Airswirl belongs to him and I own Scales :)
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I really love this deviation. It has a wonderful background story, however it took me a second to figure out what point in time this picture was. The line art is great. However, the smiles are weird, they don't look natural for some strange reason. AirSwirl's shading is great. But Scales's is nonexistent aside from her legs. One big thing, AirSwirl is lacking his tail. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/> I have also noticed that bothe AirSwirl and Scales have only one wing. I hope that you two do not fall! I absolutely love the clouds!

Ok, one tiny little thing, and then I will stop.




It looks like AirSwirl just farted. o.o